reviewed and improved - no changes of substance

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DisputeResolutionPolicy.html

@@ -51,8 +51,11 @@
         <a href="//www.cacert.org/policy/DisputeResolutionPolicy.php">
         on the CAcert website </a>.<br />
         </big>
-        This document is a <b>work-in-progress</b> to include future revisions only,<br />
-        and is currently <b>only relevant for the [policy] group</b>.<br />
+        This document is for the purposes of policy group
+        preparing <b>work-in-progress</b> and <b>DRAFT</b> future revisions.<br />
+        It is primarily <b>relevant for the [policy] group</b>.<br />
+        Any approved DRAFT changes in here should not be relied upon,
+        and will need to be confirmed within a relevant Arbitration.<br />
         Colour code:<ul>
           <li> <span class="change">Additions in BLUE</span>  <span class="strike">strikes in BLUE</span> are suggestions for future voting in PG.</li>
           <li> <span class="change2">minor and routine tweaks are in steelblue</span>.</li>
@@ -62,12 +65,18 @@
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      <ul>
+        <li>Iang: 20121112,
+          Reviewed changes CAcert to CAcert Inc and to Community.
+          These are shown in <span class="change">BLUE</span>.
+          Added a few more.
+        </li>
         <li>Iang: 20110129 <a href="//wiki.cacert.org/PolicyDecisions#p20110108">p20110108</a> approved,
           <ul><li>incorporated new text as <span class="draftadd">darkblue</span> and dropped text as <span class="draftdrop">lightblue</span>,
            <li> use of colours to meet PoP 5.3,</li>
            <li> fixed some other references to Board as Appeal.  Proposed to incorporate these without further discussion.</li>
            <li> Reviewed and changed the term CAcert to CAcert Inc. where clear.  Proposed to incorporate these without further discussion.</li>
           </ul>
+        </li>
         <li>Iang: 20110117 Changed 3.4 title to match the intent of the paras more closely, in <span class="change">BLUE</span>.</li>
         <li>Iang: 20110112 Tuned text in <a href="#3.3">3.3</a> to reflect ultimate final &amp; binding status in 3.4.  Also swapped order of terms to more customary form. Shown in <span class="change">BLUE</span>.</li>
         <li>Iang: 20110107 <b>Added proposed text in <a href="#3.4">3.4</a> to switch the Appeal from the Board to a Panel within Arbitration.</b> Shown in <span class="change">BLUE</span>.  This change is substantive. </li>
@@ -109,9 +118,14 @@
 <h2 id="s0">  0. Introduction</h2>
 
 <p>
-This is the Dispute Resolution Policy for CAcert.
+This is the Dispute Resolution Policy for
+<span class="change2">the</span>
+CAcert
+<span class="change">Community, consisting of CAcert Inc and Members who agree to the CCA</span>.
 Disputes arising out of
-operations by CAcert and interactions between
+operations by CAcert
+<span class="change">Inc</span>
+and interactions between
 <span class="change2">
 Members
 </span>
@@ -649,7 +663,7 @@ All liability of the Arbitrator for any act in
 connection with deciding a dispute is excluded
 by all parties, provided such act does not constitute
 an intentional breach of duty.
-All liability of the Arbitrators, CAcert, its officers and its
+All liability of the Arbitrators, CAcert <span class="change">Inc.</span>, its officers and its
 employees (including Case Manager)
 for any other act or omission in connection with
 arbitration proceedings is excluded, provided such acts do not
@@ -669,7 +683,8 @@ referral to the Board).
 
 <p>
 The Arbitrator generally instructs using internal remedies,
-that is ones that are within the general domain of CAcert,
+that is ones that are within the general domain of
+<span class="draftdrop">CAcert</span> <span class="change">the Community</span>,
 but there are some external remedies at his disposal.
 He may rule and instruct any of the parties on these issues.
 </p>