From 462d80109b62b9ec9317478f0f806f96aeed81f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ian Grigg <iang@cacert.org>
Date: Fri, 7 May 2010 14:52:20 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] following suggestions, reduced the PoP parts and entered them
 into PoP as a suggested WIP

git-svn-id: http://svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies@1895 14b1bab8-4ef6-0310-b690-991c95c89dfd
---
 ConfigurationControlSpecification.html | 28 ++++++++++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ConfigurationControlSpecification.html b/ConfigurationControlSpecification.html
index f324320..1f77388 100644
--- a/ConfigurationControlSpecification.html
+++ b/ConfigurationControlSpecification.html
@@ -100,17 +100,27 @@ CCS may be seen as the index to systems audit under DRC.
 <h4 id="s2.1">2.1  Controlled Document List  </h4>
 
 <p>
-This CCS creates a list of Primary or "root" documents known as Policies.
+This CCS creates a
+<span class="strike">list</span>
+<span class="change">Controlled Document List (CDL)</span>
+of Primary or "root" documents known as Policies.
 Primary documents may authorise other secondary documents
-into the list, or "practices" outside the list.
+into the CDL, or "practices" outside the list.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The controlled documents list
-contains numbers, locations and versions of all controlled documents.
+The Controlled Document List
+contains numbers, locations and
+<span class="strike">versions</span>
+<span class="change">status</span>
+of all controlled documents.
+The list is part of this CCS.
+</p>
+
+<p class="strike">
 The list is part of this CCS, and is located at
 <a href="//svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies/ControlledDocumentList.html">
-svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies/ControlledDocumentList.html</a>
+svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies/ControlledDocumentList.html</a>.
 Policy Officer is to manage the list.
 Policy Officer is to log the changes at
 <a href="//wiki.cacert.org/PolicyDecisions">
@@ -122,13 +132,15 @@ wiki.cacert.org/PolicyDecisions</a>.
 
 
 <p>
-Change to the documents is as specified by
+Change to the documents
+<span class="change"></span> is as specified by
 Policy on Policy (PoP).
+<span class="change">Policy Officer is to manage the CDL.</span>
 </p>
 
-<p class="q"> The following would possibly be better off in PoP (when a change cycle comes around), or a practices manual. </p>
+<p class="q"> The following is now found in a WIP set of changes to PoP. </p>
 
-<p>
+<p class="strike">
 Policies in effect (DRAFT and POLICY status) are to be under change control.
 Fully approved documents (POLICY status)
 are published on the CAcert website at