From 621261104acde13ca8eb20f5455d81424f047c69 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ian Grigg <iang@cacert.org>
Date: Mon, 12 Nov 2012 20:24:55 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] some observations from Werner

git-svn-id: http://svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies@2412 14b1bab8-4ef6-0310-b690-991c95c89dfd
---
 DisputeResolutionPolicy.html | 26 +++++++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/DisputeResolutionPolicy.html b/DisputeResolutionPolicy.html
index a52df81..9724d62 100644
--- a/DisputeResolutionPolicy.html
+++ b/DisputeResolutionPolicy.html
@@ -310,14 +310,22 @@ The Arbitrator conducts some preliminaries:
    <span class="change2">
    Members
    </span>
-   and are not bound
-   by the CPS are given the opportunity to enter into
-   CAcert and be bound by the CPS and these rules of arbitration.
-   If these Non-Related Persons (NRPs) remain outside,
+   and are not bound by the
+   <span class="draftdrop">CPS</span> <span class="change">CCA</span>
+   are given the opportunity to enter into
+   CAcert and be bound by the
+   <span class="draftdrop">CPS</span> <span class="change">CCA</span>
+   and these rules of arbitration.
+   If
+   <span class="draftdrop">these Non-Related Persons (NRPs)</span> <span class="change">they</span>
+   remain outside,
    their rights and remedies under CAcert's policies
-   and forum are strictly limited to that specified in the
-   Non-Related Persons -- Disclaimer and Licence.
-   NRPs may proceed with Arbitration subject to preliminary orders
+   and forum are strictly limited to
+   <span class="draftdrop">that</span> <span class="change">those</span>
+   specified in the
+   <span class="draftdrop">Non-Related Persons -- Disclaimer and Licence</span> <span class="change">Root Distribution Library</span>,
+   <span class="draftdrop">NRPs </span> <span class="change">and</span>
+   may proceed with Arbitration subject to preliminary orders
    of the Arbitrator.
   </li><li>
    Participating 
@@ -351,7 +359,7 @@ The Arbitrator conducts some preliminaries:
   </li><li>
    The Arbitrator may appoint experienced Assurers
    to assist and represent parties, especially for NRPs.
-   The Case Manager must not to provide such assistance.
+   The Case Manager must not provide such assistance.
   </li><li>
    The Arbitrator is bound to maintain the balance
    of legal fairness.
@@ -361,7 +369,7 @@ The Arbitrator conducts some preliminaries:
    to emergency actions already taken.
   </li><li>
    The Arbitrator may request any written pleadings,
-   counterclaim, and/or statements of defence.
+   counterclaims, and/or statements of defence.
 </li></ul>