From a9b74f24aadf25ee0f19c7c5cb2cb0c0ea43c462 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sam Johnston <sam@cacert.org>
Date: Thu, 24 Apr 2008 10:21:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] tweaks per discussion

git-svn-id: http://svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies@793 14b1bab8-4ef6-0310-b690-991c95c89dfd
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 RemoteAssurancePolicy.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/RemoteAssurancePolicy.html b/RemoteAssurancePolicy.html
index cc8c20d..3510793 100644
--- a/RemoteAssurancePolicy.html
+++ b/RemoteAssurancePolicy.html
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 			0. Preliminaries
 		</h2>
 		<p>
-			This sub-policy extends the Assurance Policy ("AP") by specifying how assurances are to be remotely conducted for members where insufficient assurer(s) are available. A Remote Assurer ("RA") shall be assigned by a board-appointed Remote Assurance Officer ("RAO") to conduct the assurance to their satisfaction using TWO Trusted Third Parties ("TTP"s).
+			This sub-policy extends the Assurance Policy ("AP") by specifying how assurances are to be remotely conducted for members where insufficient assurer(s) are available. A Remote Assurer ("RA") shall be assigned by a board-appointed Remote Assurance Officer ("RAO") to conduct the assurance to their satisfaction using two Trusted Third Parties ("TTP"s).
 		</p>
 		<p>
 			Successful completion of the process shall result in the Assuree achieving the status of Assurer (eg the allocation of sufficient points to reach 100). However this status should not be considered permanent and the Assuree must seek assurance by the usual means as soon as practicable.
@@ -62,11 +62,11 @@
 						<strong>Notary Public</strong> authorised to authenticate documents in their jurisdiction
 					</li>
 					<li>
-						<strong>Other</strong> trusted local public figure as approved by AO (limited to ONE of the TWO TTPs)
+						<strong>Other</strong> trusted local public figure as approved by AO (limited to one of the two TTPs)
 					</li>
 				</ol>
 			</li>
-			<li>MUST retain the Remote Assurance Form and copies of the identity documents for at least 60 days and respond to enquiries in a timely fashion
+			<li>MUST retain the Remote Assurance Form and a copy of the identity documents for at least 60 days and respond to enquiries in a timely fashion
 			</li>
 			<li>SHOULD have experience with the Remote Assurance Program, unless no experienced local TTPs are available within a 30 day period
 			</li>
@@ -142,13 +142,13 @@
 			</li>
 			<li>Assuree SHALL have their identity verified by the TTP by:<br />
 				<ol style="list-style-type: lower-roman;">
-					<li>obtaining and printing two copies of the Remote Assurance Form
+					<li>obtaining and printing two copies of the Remote Assurance Form (for paper forms only)
 					</li>
 					<li>taking two copies of any identity documents to be presented to the TTP
 					</li>
 					<li>meeting with the TTP in person and furnishing <strong>at least</strong> sufficient identification to meet the requirements of the prevailing Assurance Policy
 					</li>
-					<li>executing the Remote Assurance Form in dupicate, in the presence of the TTP (for paper forms)
+					<li>executing the Remote Assurance Form in duplicate, in the presence of the TTP (for paper forms only)
 					</li>
 					<li>leaving a Remote Assurance Form and copies of identity documents with the TTP for at least 60 days
 					</li>