incorporated changes from Bernd Jantzen

git-svn-id: http://svn.cacert.org/CAcert/Policies@2018 14b1bab8-4ef6-0310-b690-991c95c89dfd

TTPAssistedAssurancePolicy.html

@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
    by specifying how Assurers can be assisted by
    outsourcing the identity documents verification
    component of assurance to trusted third parties (TTPs).
-   Definitions can be found in AP or in
+   Definitions and terms can be found in AP or in
    <a href="//wiki.cacert.org/AssuranceHandbook">Assurance Handbook</a>
    ("AH").
   </p>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
   <p>
    This sub-policy is restricted to members located
    in areas not well-served with Assurers.
-   It serves a goal of promoting both Assurers and Members is those areas.
+   It serves a goal of promoting both Assurers and Members in those areas.
   </p>
 
   <h2 id="s2"> 2. Roles </h2>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 
   <p>
    A Member ("assuree") who is located in a place not well-served
-   by Assurers may use the TTP-assisted Assurance.
+   by Assurers may use the TTP-assisted assurance.
   </p>
 
   <h2 id="s3"> 3. The Assurance </h2>
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@
      for Assurers.
     </li><li>
      Mechanisms for contacting Assurers available for
-     TTP-assisted Assurances.
+     TTP-assisted assurances.
     </li><li>
      Definition of
      <a href="https://wiki.cacert.org/AssuranceHandbook2#What_is_a_Senior_Assurer.3F">
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
     Use of a type of TTP not on the list must be approved by
     AO and notified to Board.
     It is an explicit goal to reduce the usage of
-    TTP-assisted Assurances in favour of face-to-face Assurance.
+    TTP-assisted assurances in favour of face-to-face Assurance.
   <p>
 
   <p>
@@ -186,28 +186,45 @@
     Officer may document and implement minor variations to this policy.
   </p>
 
-  <h2 id="s5"> 5. Topup Assurance Points </h2>
+  <h2 id="s5"> 5. Topup Assurance <span class="strike">Points</span> </h2>
 
   <p>
-    AO is to operate a topup Assurance programme
-    to help seed desert areas with Assurers.
+    AO is to operate a <cite>Topup Assurance Programme</cite>
+    to help seed deserts with Assurers.
+<span class="change">
+    A topup assurance will add additional Assurance Points
+    to those gained from two previously conducted TTP-assisted assurances,
+    in order for a Member to reach 100 Assurance Points
+    for the express purpose of becoming an Assurer.
+</span>
   </p>
 
   <p>
-    A topup Assurance is conducted by a third Senior Assurer
+    A topup assurance is conducted by a third Senior Assurer
     according to the following requirements:
   </p>
 
   <ol><li>
-      Assurer must be a Senior Assurer.
-    </li><li>
       Assurer Challenge must be completed as passed by Member.
     </li><li>
-      The topup must be requested by Member for purpose of enabling the Member to reach Assurer level.
+      The topup must be requested by Member for
+      purpose of enabling the Member to reach Assurer level.
+    </li><li>
+      Topup Assurer must be a Senior Assurer,
+<span class="change">
+      and must be independent of the TTP-Assist Assurers.
+</span>
     </li><li>
+<span class="change">
+      The Topup Assurer reviews the two TTP-assisted assurances,
+      and conducts other checks as set by the Assurance Officer.
+      The normal face-to-face meeting is not conducted.
+</span>
+<span class="strike">
       The two TTP-Assisted Assurances already conducted are to be reviewed.
+</span>
     </li><li>
-      Topup may award up to 35 points.
+      Topup Assurer may award up to 35 points.
     </li><li>
         Assurance must be marked as Topup
         (e.g., by use of new feature with TTPAdmin flag).