minor changes, questions posed

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Agreements/CAcertCommunityAgreement.html

@@ -7,6 +7,9 @@
  <title> CAcert Community Agreement </title>
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@@ -41,12 +44,14 @@
         and is currently <b>only relevant for the [policy] group</b>.<br />
         Suggested <span class="change">additions in BLUE</span>, <span class="strike">strikes in blue</span>.<br />
         </p>
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-        Iang <span class="change">20100716</span>: fixed up to deal with RDL and dropping of NRP-DaL.  Plus minor format changes, and to XHTML<br />
-        <li>Iang <span class="change">20100830</span>: made clearer inclusion of certificate chain
-        </li></ul>
-        <hr />
+        <li>Iang <span class="change">20100929</span>: cleanup, minor fixes and some questions posed. </li>
+        <li>Iang <span class="change">20100830</span>: made clearer inclusion of certificate chain </li>
+        <li>Iang <span class="change">20100716</span>: fixed up to deal with RDL and dropping of NRP-DaL.  Plus minor format changes, and to XHTML</li>
+        </li>
+     </ul>
+  <hr />
 
 
 
@@ -68,6 +73,8 @@ being an operator of services to the Community.
     New South Wales, Australia.
     Note that Association Members are distinct from
     the Members defined here.
+<ul class="q"><li>Does CAcert mean CAcert Inc. still?</li>
+<li>CAcert seems more to mean the Community these days.  Consider a change in definition?</li></ul>
   </li><li>
     "Member"
     means you, a registered participant within CAcert's Community,
@@ -135,7 +142,7 @@ being an operator of services to the Community.
     means <span class="strike">the</span> your act
     of making available <span class="strike">your</span> certificate<span class="change">S</span> to another person.
     Generally, you install and configure your software
-    to act as your agent and facilite this and other tasks.
+    to act as your agent and <span class="change">facilitate OFFERING</span> <span class="strike">facilite this</span> and other tasks.
     OFFER does not imply suggestion of <span class="strike">reliance</span> <span class="change">RELIANCE</span>.
   </li><li>
     "Issue"
@@ -199,8 +206,7 @@ Your agreement is given by any of
 Your agreement
 is effective from the date of the first event above
 that makes this agreement known to you.
-This Agreement
-replaces and supercedes prior agreements.
+This Agreement replaces and supercedes prior agreements.
 <span class="strike">, including the NRP-DaL.</span>
 </p>
 
@@ -254,7 +260,7 @@ Note that the following exceptions override this clause:
 
 <ol><li>
     Contributions to controlled documents are subject to
-    Policy on Policy ("PoP" => COD1)
+    Policy on Policy ("PoP" => COD1).
   </li><li>
     Source code is subject to an open source licence regime.
 </li></ol>
@@ -263,7 +269,7 @@ Note that the following exceptions override this clause:
 
 
 <p>
-You give rights to CAcert to store, verify and process
+You give rights to CAcert to store, verify, <span class="strike">and</span> process
 and publish your data in accordance with policies in force.
 These rights include shipping the data to foreign countries
 for system administration, support and processing purposes.
@@ -435,6 +441,8 @@ However, some information will continue to
 be held for certificate processing purposes.
 </p>
 
+<ul class="q"><li> Consider a change to the termination clause to make Support's job more easy?</li></ul>
+
 <p>
 The provisions on Arbitration survive any termination
 by you by leaving CAcert.
@@ -458,6 +466,8 @@ by the Community.
 Changes will be notified to you by email to your primary address.
 </p>
 
+<ul class="q"><li> We've not been able to do this easily.  Change?</li></ul>
+
 <p>
 If you do not agree to the changes, you may terminate as above.
 Continued use of the service shall be deemed to be agreement
@@ -502,6 +512,7 @@ policy process as this agreement, and they should
 mirror and reinforce these terms.
 </p>
 
+<ul class="q"><li> This clause was found to be badly written in the recent debate on CAcert Inc contracts.  Clarify?</li></ul>
 
 <h4 id="s4.2"> 4.2  References and Other Binding Documents </h4>
 
@@ -558,6 +569,8 @@ The Handbook is not however an agreement, and is overruled
 by this agreement and others listed above.
 </p>
 
+<ul class="q"><li> Reference to Handbook seems to be out of place.  Drop?  Replace with wiki?</li></ul>
+
 <h4 id="s4.4"> 4.4  Not Covered in this Agreement </h4>
 
 <p>
@@ -571,6 +584,7 @@ are CAcert's intellectual property
 and you do not have rights other than those stated.
 </p>
 
+<ul class="q"><li> Does this need to be updated with reference to RDL?  </li></ul>
 
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