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<title> CAcert Community Agreement </title>
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and is currently <b>only relevant for the [policy] group</b>.<br />
Suggested <span class="change">additions in BLUE</span>, <span class="strike">strikes in blue</span>.<br />
</p>
<ul><li>
<ul>
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Iang <span class="change">20100716</span>: fixed up to deal with RDL and dropping of NRP-DaL. Plus minor format changes, and to XHTML<br />
<li>Iang <span class="change">20100830</span>: made clearer inclusion of certificate chain
</li></ul>
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<li>Iang <span class="change">20100929</span>: cleanup, minor fixes and some questions posed. </li>
<li>Iang <span class="change">20100830</span>: made clearer inclusion of certificate chain </li>
<li>Iang <span class="change">20100716</span>: fixed up to deal with RDL and dropping of NRP-DaL. Plus minor format changes, and to XHTML</li>
</li>
</ul>
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New South Wales, Australia.
Note that Association Members are distinct from
the Members defined here.
<ul class="q"><li>Does CAcert mean CAcert Inc. still?</li>
<li>CAcert seems more to mean the Community these days. Consider a change in definition?</li></ul>
</li><li>
"Member"
means you, a registered participant within CAcert's Community,
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means <span class="strike">the</span> your act
of making available <span class="strike">your</span> certificate<span class="change">S</span> to another person.
Generally, you install and configure your software
to act as your agent and facilite this and other tasks.
to act as your agent and <span class="change">facilitate OFFERING</span> <span class="strike">facilite this</span> and other tasks.
OFFER does not imply suggestion of <span class="strike">reliance</span> <span class="change">RELIANCE</span>.
</li><li>
"Issue"
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Your agreement
is effective from the date of the first event above
that makes this agreement known to you.
This Agreement
replaces and supercedes prior agreements.
This Agreement replaces and supercedes prior agreements.
<span class="strike">, including the NRP-DaL.</span>
</p>
@ -254,7 +260,7 @@ Note that the following exceptions override this clause:
<ol><li>
Contributions to controlled documents are subject to
Policy on Policy ("PoP" => COD1)
Policy on Policy ("PoP" => COD1).
</li><li>
Source code is subject to an open source licence regime.
</li></ol>
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<p>
You give rights to CAcert to store, verify and process
You give rights to CAcert to store, verify, <span class="strike">and</span> process
and publish your data in accordance with policies in force.
These rights include shipping the data to foreign countries
for system administration, support and processing purposes.
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be held for certificate processing purposes.
</p>
<ul class="q"><li> Consider a change to the termination clause to make Support's job more easy?</li></ul>
<p>
The provisions on Arbitration survive any termination
by you by leaving CAcert.
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Changes will be notified to you by email to your primary address.
</p>
<ul class="q"><li> We've not been able to do this easily. Change?</li></ul>
<p>
If you do not agree to the changes, you may terminate as above.
Continued use of the service shall be deemed to be agreement
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mirror and reinforce these terms.
</p>
<ul class="q"><li> This clause was found to be badly written in the recent debate on CAcert Inc contracts. Clarify?</li></ul>
<h4 id="s4.2"> 4.2 References and Other Binding Documents </h4>
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by this agreement and others listed above.
</p>
<ul class="q"><li> Reference to Handbook seems to be out of place. Drop? Replace with wiki?</li></ul>
<h4 id="s4.4"> 4.4 Not Covered in this Agreement </h4>
<p>
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and you do not have rights other than those stated.
</p>
<ul class="q"><li> Does this need to be updated with reference to RDL? </li></ul>
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